did you want some comments?

- looks like 2 separate links at bottom of page, but there's actually only 1

- seems like there is a simple message here:

I'm providing this page solely for the sake of the community, in the event users want to obtain hardware from other users. I make no representation as to the quality or state of any of the systems listed, and listings often are not complete or accurate in their descriptions of the equipment; hence caveat emptor. I have no business relationship with the listers, nor make money from the listing or any sales.

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everything else you say adds personality and detail, but i think that's what you mean, right? i don't suppose there's any harm in length, since you're helping out individuals who would invest in the reading. so, keeping what you have is fine, just checking as to what your intention/complete message is here

hope this is useful and you intended to solicit opinon -paul