draft-polk-tsvwg-intserv-multiple-tspec-06
2011-05-16 17:59:23 GMT
James and Subha, here is a more detailed review of the draft. The following are a combination of nits, general comments, and questions. You can decide as to their importance. page 3, 4'th paragraph. In the previous paragraph, you denote the direction of the ADSPEC as being "downstream". for the sake of completeness, you should probably denote the direction of the RESV. page 4, 1'st paragraph. Break up the first sentence. it runs waaaaaay to long with too many thoughts entwined in it. page 4, 5'th paragraph. You should qualify the last sentence to say that dynamically adapting data streams during reservation set up. page 5. Figure 1. This figure (along with Figure 4 and Figure 6) repeat information in existing RFCs. I have a preference to have this information removed and simply refer the reader to the appropriate RFCs. While it may be helpful when first writing the first multi-tspec draft for the initial reading (and people reading it at its first presentation(Continue reading), I don't think anything is gained by repeating the information in future versions of the draft. Shame on the reader for being too lazy to look up the info. page 5, 1'st paragraph. For the sake of completeness, you may want to point out that Section 5 deals with security considerations. Section 3. There is no mention of a maximum number of Multi-tspec entries (you do make mention of this in 4.10, but as an open issue). I know this has been brought up in previous meetings, and I'd like to re-advocate the idea of putting a cap on the number of entries. Poorly developed code, or malicious behavior, could conceivably send tspec in the hundreds (thousands?), which would seem at the very least to represent an attack vector for RSVP capable nodes. How about something like a recommendation of at most 4 entries of the multi_tspec object, and a max of 10? The thing to note is that if you decide to add a maximum amount, you'll probably need/want to slightly change the format of your multi_tspec object.
, I don't think anything is gained by repeating the information in future
versions of the draft. Shame on the reader for being too lazy to look up the info.
page 5, 1'st paragraph. For the sake of completeness, you may want to point out that Section 5 deals with
security considerations.
Section 3. There is no mention of a maximum number of Multi-tspec entries (you do make mention of this in
4.10, but as an open issue). I know this has been brought up in previous meetings, and I'd like to
re-advocate the idea of putting a cap on the number of entries. Poorly developed code, or malicious
behavior, could conceivably send tspec in the hundreds (thousands?), which would seem at the very least
to represent an attack vector for RSVP capable nodes. How about something like a recommendation of at most
4 entries of the multi_tspec object, and a max of 10? The thing to note is that if you decide to add a maximum
amount, you'll probably need/want to slightly change the format of your multi_tspec object.
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