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Alfred Hönes | 23 Nov 21:04
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draft-welzl-expires-00


Hello,
after studying the Internet-Draft authored by you,
                draft-welzl-expires-00,
I'd like to submit a few comments, addressing the issues I found
in that memo.

To give more context, sometimes I quote larger blocks of text
literally and show the replacement proposed using the shorthand
notation:

   <original draft text>
---
   <modified text>

I use change bars ('|' in column 1) and up/down pointing marker
lines ('^^^'/'vvv') to emphasize the location of textual issues
and/or proposed corrections.  Modified text has been re-adjusted
to match RFC formatting rules, where appropriate.

(1)  General: Relation to RFC 4021, IANA Considerations.

The draft lacks an IANA Considerations section.
It should aim at updating the entry for "Expires" in the
Header Field registry established by RFC 4021.

Further, since the draft text -- in particular in Sect. 3 & 4 --
contains a revision of Section 2.1.50 of RFC 4021, it should say
so explicitely.
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Michael Welzl | 23 Nov 21:27
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Re: draft-welzl-expires-00


Hi,

Thanks a whole lot for your feedback, and the time you put
into it! We'll incorporate this into the next update, which we
wanted to start working on soon anyway.

Cheers,
Michael

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Alfred HÎnes" <ah <at> tr-sys.de>
To: <michael.welzl <at> uibk.ac.at>; <thomas.nolf <at> student.uibk.ac.at>;
<jpalme <at> dsv.su.se>
Cc: <ietf-822 <at> imc.org>
Sent: Sunday, November 23, 2008 9:04 PM
Subject: draft-welzl-expires-00

> Hello,
> after studying the Internet-Draft authored by you,
>                 draft-welzl-expires-00,
> I'd like to submit a few comments, addressing the issues I found
> in that memo.
>
>
> To give more context, sometimes I quote larger blocks of text
> literally and show the replacement proposed using the shorthand
> notation:
>
>    <original draft text>
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