4 Dec 1998 07:18
Comments on draft-gellens-format-02.txt
Dan Kohn <dan <at> teledesic.com>
1998-12-04 06:18:32 GMT
1998-12-04 06:18:32 GMT
I think <ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-gellens-format-02.txt> is a good approach and I'm a big fan of getting this implemented. However, I find a little of the writing unclear. Here are some suggested replacements for the text. I don't believe they change the technical content. I would globally replace TEXT/PLAIN with Text/Plain or text/plain, as it is not an acronym. The latter is consistent with usage in RFC 2046, and looks better. In section 4, I suggest adding a sentence to the end of the of the second paragraph, saying: "In this memo, text which fits this description is defined as 'fixed.'" In section 4.1, I suggest adding a sentence to the end of the of the first paragraph, saying: "In this memo, text which fits this description is defined as 'flowed.'" In that same paragraph, I would change "The display shifts to the next line, starting with the word which would not fit on the previous line." to "That word is displayed at the left margin of the next line." I would also add a sentence to the end of the section, saying: When the text format described in this section is stored on a file system that supports MIME typing, the text/paragraph type defined in Appendix A could be an appropriate description of the media type. However, many mailers incorrectly treat unknown text subtypes as an attachment, so text/paragraph SHOULD NOT be used for network communications. Instead, format=flowed SHOULD be used for those purposes.(Continue reading)

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