Internet-Drafts | 26 Aug 21:34 2004
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I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-rap-cops-tls-08.txt

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	Title		: COPS Over TLS
	Author(s)	: J. Walker, A. Kulkarni
	Filename	: draft-ietf-rap-cops-tls-08.txt
	Pages		: 11
	Date		: 2004-8-26
	
This memo describes how to use TLS to secure COPS connections over 
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Wijnen, Bert (Bert | 31 Aug 18:43 2004
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AD review: draft-ietf-rap-cops-tls-08.txt submission

Here is what I found

1. Sect 4.1, it is unclear what kind of field the FLAGS field is
   is it a bitmask? an Unsigned16, or what? If a bit field, which
   bit indicates the TLS flag? I also wonder if the flag would not
   be better called StartTLS, but that is a nit.

2. Same sect 4,1
   Also, I guess the ///// field is a reserved field?
   If so, I would make that clear, and I would state that it 
   must be set to zero in transmit and be ignored on receipt.

3. I had this comment/question back inmarch of this year as well
   and have not yet seen a response:
     Section 7 states that the non-well-know port needs to be communicated
     by the server to the client. But it does not explain how. Am I missing
     something here?

4. You may want to add to the IANA considerations section that the registry
   is located at: http://www.iana.org/assignments/cops-parameters
   That is where they are supposed to add the error code.

5. Assigning value 16 as an error code is something that the WG should not
   do. The proper procedure is to mark it as a error-code-TBD-by-IANA
   and then ask IANA to assign and then RFC-Editor will fill in the numbers.
   I am not aware that other on-going work is taking place in this area,
   so the risk for conflicts is probably low.

6. I also still wonder:
   that StartTLS ClientSI object... who controls assignment of additional flags
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