2 Mar 2011 00:25
Re: Some questions and suggestions on PIM-PORT draft
Stig Venaas <stig <at> venaas.com>
2011-03-01 23:25:13 GMT
2011-03-01 23:25:13 GMT
Hi, thanks for the detailed review. See inline. On 2/27/2011 9:16 PM, Bharat Joshi wrote: > Hi Stig, > > I finally managed to squeeze some time to look at the updated draft. I have got some more questions on this below: > > Regards, > Bharat > > • You may want to add 'mechanism' in the following sentence: "if and only if both have reliable transport enabled." -> "if and only if both have reliable transport mechanism enabled. Done > • Can we just use the full-form when an acronyms used first time? I am sure it will be asked when IESG review happens. For example: RPF neighbor. Another useful thing would be to add such acronyms in terminology or a reference to other RFC. Done I think. Referring to 4601 for RPF neighbor and GenID. Also expanded the latter on first occurrence. > • In section 3.1, section number is missing in: > > 'All Hello messages containing the PIM-over-TCP Capable hello option, MUST also contain the Interface ID hello option, see section ." Fixed > • In section 3.1, should we use 'It is RECOMMENDED that' instead of "We RECOMMEND that".(Continue reading)
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