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Mike McBride | 1 Dec 2006 23:41
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Re: wglc draft-ietf-pim-rpf-vector-03

Stig,

>>  Today begins a two week wglc for draft-ietf-pim-rpf-vector-03. Please
>>  review:
>>  http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-pim-rpf-vector-03.txt
>
> What is the status of the attributes draft? It might have been good to
> review them together... Below I'm also suggesting some changes to the
> attributes draft.

The attributes draft had a wglc earlier this year which resulted in a few 
comments. Those comments were recently addressed in the -03. Since its 
been fairly long since the last wglc, and given your additional comments, 
the authors need to address your points then we'll issue another wglc.

thanks,
mike

> I support this draft, but there are some issues that need to be taken
> care of. There are also some typos.
>
> I think an IANA registry is needed for the attribute types. It
> seems the attribute draft does not specify that.
>
> This draft should in IANA considerations specify that it should be
> given a value from this registry. And also perhaps say TBD instead
> of suggesting 0.
>
> Semi-editorial/serious editorial issues:
>
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Mike McBride | 5 Dec 2006 22:56
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IETF67 pimwg mtg notes

Please send me any corrections. Thanks to Tom for the notes.

Monday Nov 6th, IETF 67 PIM WG

pim mib forwarded to bill after wglc
     andy brought up fact that we could use number assigned
     bill status - mib doctor review
         dan sent two requests but no one has picked up on it yet
         after mib doctor review, iesg last call for 2 weeks
         not more than about 4 weeks after that you can get OID bsr mib
     limited resources of mib doctors should focus on pim mib and not bsr
     mib then we can have them look at bsr mib
     it has passed wglc and been sent to bill

pim join attributes draft
     wglc success
     minor nits fixed

pim rpf vector draft
     need wglc since changes made

pim last hop threats
     needs wg review

linklocal
     atwood to present during this meeting

bidir
     sent to IESG
     waiting on bill to look for gotchas like security considerations
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Dave Thaler | 9 Dec 2006 06:50
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MIB Doctor review of draft-ietf-pim-mib-v2-07.txt

I have completed by review of draft-ietf-pim-mib-v2-07.txt, as requested
by Dan Romascanu.  Except for the items identified below, everything
else
in the MIB Review Checklist was OK.

I have organized my comments into lists of what I feel are MUST, SHOULD,
and MAY fix items.

MUST fix:

1)  Missing normative reference for IANA-RTPROTO-MIB as required by
RFC4181 
    section 3.6.   Citation should be added to last sentence of section
3 
    where it is mentioned along with other modules which do have
citations.

2)  ORGANIZATION clause MUST have the "full name" of the working group,
per 
    RFC4181 section 4.5.  Per the IETF WG page, this should be the
"Protocol 
    Independent Multicast (PIM) Working Group"

3)  The copyright notice on page 1 is now obsolete, should say The IETF
Trust
    (see the ID-guidelines).  The copyright notice at the end is fine.

4)  Per RFC4181 section 3.6, all references must be cited in the text.  
    The following appear as uncited references: [RFC3569], [RFC3956], 
    [I-D.ietf-mboned-ip-mcast-mib], [RFC2434], [RFC3692].
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Internet-Drafts | 13 Dec 2006 21:51
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I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-pim-mib-v2-08.txt

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
directories.
This draft is a work item of the Protocol Independent Multicast Working Group of the IETF.

	Title		: Protocol Independent Multicast MIB
	Author(s)	: J. Lingard, et al.
	Filename	: draft-ietf-pim-mib-v2-08.txt
	Pages		: 92
	Date		: 2006-12-13
	
This memo defines a portion of the Management Information Base (MIB)
   for use with network management protocols in the Internet community.
   In particular, it describes managed objects used for managing the
   Protocol Independent Multicast (PIM) protocols (PIM-SM, BIDIR-PIM and    PIM-DM).  This document is part of
work in progress to obsolete RFC
   2934, and is to be preferred where the two documents overlap.  This
   document does not obsolete RFC 2934.

A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-pim-mib-v2-08.txt

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Internet-Drafts | 19 Dec 2006 21:50
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I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-pim-mib-v2-09.txt

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
directories.
This draft is a work item of the Protocol Independent Multicast Working Group of the IETF.

	Title		: Protocol Independent Multicast MIB
	Author(s)	: J. Lingard, et al.
	Filename	: draft-ietf-pim-mib-v2-09.txt
	Pages		: 92
	Date		: 2006-12-19
	
This memo defines a portion of the Management Information Base (MIB)
   for use with network management protocols in the Internet community.
   In particular, it describes managed objects used for managing the
   Protocol Independent Multicast (PIM) protocols (PIM-SM, BIDIR-PIM and
   PIM-DM).  This document is part of work in progress to obsolete RFC
   2934, and is to be preferred where the two documents overlap.  This
   document does not obsolete RFC 2934.

A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-pim-mib-v2-09.txt

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David McWalter | 19 Dec 2006 22:34
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RE: MIB Doctor review of draft-ietf-pim-mib-v2-07.txt

Dave,

Thanks for your thorough review of -07.  We did two iterations as a result.

Firstly, -08 addressed most of your feedback, as detailed inline below.

Then you kindly re-reviewed the draft, and provided two further points of feedback, which I addressed in -09.
-  The introduction should mention PIM-DM (as well as the abstract).
-  The interaction between pimStaticRPOverrideDynamic and pimStaticRPPrecedence was not legal.

Regards,
David McWalter.

-----Original Message-----
From: Dave Thaler [mailto:dthaler <at> windows.microsoft.com]
Sent: 09 December 2006 05:51
To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); Raghava Sivaramu; James Lingard; David
McWalter; Bharat Joshi
Cc: Bill Fenner; PIM WG; mib-doctors <at> ietf.org
Subject: MIB Doctor review of draft-ietf-pim-mib-v2-07.txt

I have completed by review of draft-ietf-pim-mib-v2-07.txt, as requested
by Dan Romascanu.  Except for the items identified below, everything
else
in the MIB Review Checklist was OK.

I have organized my comments into lists of what I feel are MUST, SHOULD,
and MAY fix items.

MUST fix:
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