AD review of draft-ietf-behave-v4v6-bih-05
2011-08-03 22:50:57 GMT
Hi, Below is the AD review of draft-ietf-behave-v4v6-bih-05. Most are editorial comments. Some are RFC2119-related. Some are simply questions I would like answered, and the answer might be best in the document so other readers know the answers as well. === AD review of draft-ietf-behave-v4v6-bih-05 The abstract or section 1.1 should explain WHY a successor is needed. 2.1 refers to Appendix B; there is no appendix B. Typically appendices are used for non-normative content, but this appendix lists functions that MUST be intercepted (according to 2.1). This would probably be better placed in the main part of the document. 2.1 says the APIs MUST be intercepted; the Appendix says they SHOULD be intercepted. Which is it? 2.2 says "Protocol translation SHOULD NOT be performed for IPv4 packets sent to the IPv4 address range used by local synthesis and for which a mapping table entry does not exist. The implementation SHOULD attempt to route such packets via IPv4 interfaces instead." Why should and not MUST? Is should, what ar ethe valid exceptions to the recommended practice?(Continue reading)
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