Will Liu (Shucheng | 22 May 2013 05:02
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FW: New Version Notification for draft-manral-mpls-rfc3811bis-02.txt

Folks, 

We updated the draft by modifying the introduction, typos in section 5, and adding a section highlighting
the changes on rfc3811.

Your review and comments are highly appreciated. 

Regards,
Will

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Filename:	 draft-manral-mpls-rfc3811bis
Revision:	 02
Title:		 Definitions of Textual Conventions (TCs) for Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) Management
Creation date:	 2013-05-20
Group:		 Individual Submission
Number of pages: 22
URL:             http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-manral-mpls-rfc3811bis-02.txt
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Gregory Mirsky | 22 May 2013 00:56
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Re: MPLS-RT review of draft-farbryantrel-mpls-retire-ach-tlv

Dear Authors, et al.,
firstly, I'll address format of MPLS-RT review as set by WG chairs:
  • The document is coherent, clearly useful and technically sound
  • The document is ready to be adopted by MPLS WG
 
Now several comments and possible typo corrections:
  • Perhaps re-word "No Associated Channel Type yet defined uses a TLV" into "So far none of defined Associated Channel Types uses a TLV as specified by RFC 5586". That seems to be more accurate as MPLS-TP BFD Proactive CV message format uses Source MEP-ID TLV, though not according to RFC 5586, that might be viewed as example of ACH TLV.
  • Introduction, first para, first sentense s/is/if/
  • Introduction, fourth para, in "However, of the 18 ACH Channel Types currently defined none allows the use of ACH TLVs [IANA-ACH]" I'd consider s/allows/requires/ to stress that up to now we managed to develop protocol suite without use of  a single ACH TLV
  • Introduction, last para "This document determines that ACH TLVs are not useful …" might be re-worded to "This document states that ACH TLVs, as specified in RFC 5586, are not useful …"
  • Section 2, note that references to ACH TLVs exist in RFC 5586 outside of Section 3, e.g. Section 4.2.1.1, p.10, as well as in several figures, e.g. figure 6.
  • Section 3, if motivation of this document is to negate MUST in Section 3 of RFC 5586 that ACH TLV Header preceeds G-ACh message, then would following sufficiently express it: "A G-ACh message MAY NOT be preceeded by an ACH TLV Header."
  • Section 6, I think that we might only remove too restrictive requirement of RFC 5586 while allowing use of ACH TLV following G-ACh message.
 
        Regards,
                Greg
 
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Cc: draft-farbryantrel-mpls-retire-ach-tlv <at> tools.ietf.org; mpls-chairs <at> tools.ietf.org
Subject: MPLS-RT review of draft-farbryantrel-mpls-retire-ach-tlv
 
Jia, Lizhong, Greg and Eric,
 
You have been selected as an MPLS Review team reviewers for draft-farbryantrel-mpls-retire-ach-tlv-00.
 
Note to authors: You have been CC'd on this email so that you can know that this review is going on. However, please do not review your own document.
 
Reviews should comment on whether the document is coherent, is it useful (ie, is it likely to be actually useful in operational networks), and is the document technically sound?  We are interested in knowing whether the document is ready to be considered for WG adoption (ie, it doesn't have to be perfect at this point, but should be a good start).
 
Reviews should be sent to the document authors, WG co-chairs and WG secretary, and CC'd to the MPLS WG email list. If necessary, comments may be sent privately to only the WG chairs.
 
Are you able to review this draft by Mat 24, 2013?
 
Thanks, Loa
(as MPLS WG chair)
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George Swallow (swallow | 21 May 2013 18:22
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Meaning of sub-TLVs for TLV 21 in Return Path Specified

Mach, et al. -

In section 4.1. Sending an Echo Request, it is stated:
The Reply Path TLV includes one or several reply path sub-TLV(s) to identify the return path(s) the egress LSR should use for its reply. It would appear that the semantics of TLV 21 are very different than the semantics of TLV 1. Since TLV 1 defines a FEC stack which maps to a single LSP. Why do you want the NIL FEC which only makes sense as part of a FEC stack? Under what circumstances would you ever use one of the multicast FECs (sub-TLVs 17, 18, 19, 20)? What is the meaning of a return path to a VPN IPv4 prefix, or VPN IPv6 prefix? Note that if the prefix is multi-homed it may not even return to the originating PE! What is the meaning of a return path to an L2 VPN endpoint? George
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RFC Errata System | 21 May 2013 16:13
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[Technical Errata Reported] RFC6428 (3629)

The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6428,
"Proactive Connectivity Verification, Continuity Check, and Remote Defect Indication for the MPLS
Transport Profile".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6428&eid=3629

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Type: Technical
Reported by: Alan Davey <alan.davey <at> metaswitch.com>

Section: 3.5.3

Original Text
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The length is the length of the following data: the Global_ID, Node Identifier, and Attachment Circuit ID
(AC_ID) are as per [9]. 

Corrected Text
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The length is the length of the data following the length field.  The Global_ID, Node Identifier, and
Attachment Circuit ID (AC_ID) are as per [9].

Notes
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Instructions:
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can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. 

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RFC6428 (draft-ietf-mpls-tp-cc-cv-rdi-06)
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Title               : Proactive Connectivity Verification, Continuity Check, and Remote Defect Indication for the
MPLS Transport Profile
Publication Date    : November 2011
Author(s)           : D. Allan, Ed., G. Swallow Ed., J. Drake Ed.
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Multiprotocol Label Switching
Area                : Routing
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG
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Daniele Ceccarelli | 21 May 2013 09:37
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Re: poll to see if we have consensus to make draft-jjb-mpls-rsvp-te-hsmp-lsp an MPLS wg document

Yes/support
 
BR
Daniele
---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Loa Andersson <loa <at> pi.nu>
Date: Thu, May 16, 2013 at 10:49 AM
Subject: [mpls] poll to see if we have consensus to make draft-jjb-mpls-rsvp-te-hsmp-lsp an MPLS wg document
To: "mpls <at> ietf.org" <mpls <at> ietf.org>
Cc: "draft-jjb-mpls-rsvp-te-hsmp-lsp <at> tools.ietf.org" <draft-jjb-mpls-rsvp-te-hsmp-lsp <at> tools.ietf.org>, "mpls-chairs <at> tools.ietf.org" <mpls-chairs <at> tools.ietf.org>


Working Group,

This is to start a two week poll on adopting
draft-jjb-mpls-rsvp-te-hsmp-lsp-04 as an MPLS working
group document.

Please send your comments (support/not support) to the mpls working
group mailing list (mpls <at> ietf.org). Please give a technical
motivation for your support/not support, especially if you think that
the document should not be adopted as a working group document.

This poll ends May 31, 2013.

There are one IPR claim against this document, see IPR claim #1840.

The authors has stated on the working group mailing list
that they are not aware of any other IPR claims against this draft.
However if you are on the the mpls working group mailing list and
aware of IPR that relates to this draft, the time to disclose
this is now.

/Loa
(mpls wg co-chair)
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The IESG | 21 May 2013 03:40
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Document Action: 'Applicability of MPLS-TP Linear Protection for Ring Topologies' to Informational RFC (draft-ietf-mpls-tp-ring-protection-06.txt)

The IESG has approved the following document:
- 'Applicability of MPLS-TP Linear Protection for Ring Topologies'
  (draft-ietf-mpls-tp-ring-protection-06.txt) as Informational RFC

This document is the product of the Multiprotocol Label Switching Working
Group.

The IESG contact persons are Adrian Farrel and Stewart Bryant.

A URL of this Internet Draft is:
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-tp-ring-protection/

Technical Summary

   This document presents an applicability of existing MPLS protection
   mechanisms, both local and end-to-end, to Multi-Protocol Label
   Switching Transport Profile (MPLS-TP) in ring topologies.  This
   document does not propose any new mechanisms or protocols.
   Protection on rings offers a number of opportunities for optimization
   as the protection choices are starkly limited (all traffic traveling
   one way around a ring can only be switched to travel the other way on
   the ring), but also suffers from some complications caused by the
   limitations of the topology.

   Requirements for MPLS-TP protection especially for protection in ring
   topologies are discussed in "Requirements of an MPLS Transport
   Profile" (RFC 5654) and "MPLS Transport Profile (MPLS-TP)
   Survivability Framework" (RFC 6372).  This document shows how MPLS-TP
   linear protection as defined in RFC 6378 can be applied to single
   ring topologies, discusses how most of the requirements are met, and
   describes scenarios in which the function provided by applying linear
   protection in a ring topology falls short of some of the
   requirements.

Working Group Summary

   This document was the subject of considerable debate in the MPLS
   working group. There was some concern about whether this work
   prohibited or devalued the development of specialised protection
   techniques for deployment in ring topologies.

   The document was re-worked to make it clear that it is basically
   an applicability statement showing how linear protection defined 
   in RFC 6378 can be applied to ring topologies, what function can
   be achieved, and what issues remain. It was made clear to the
   working group that specialist ring protection techniques were still
   in scope for the working group provided that they demonstrate 
   improvements over the application of linear protection, and provided
   they can interwork with general protection in the wider MPLS-TP
   network.

   A second WG last call was held and the document gained consensus.

   Please see RFC editor note for a commentary on the number of 
   front-page authors.

Document Quality 

   This an informational document, it describes how the technologies 
   defined in earlier RFCs can be applied to ring topologies. 

   The document has been reviewed needed, the working 
   group last call was brought to the attention of SG15 in 
   ITU-T. 

Personnel 

   Loa Andersson (loa <at> pi.nu) is the document shepherd 
   Adrian Farrel (Adrian <at> olddog.co.uk) is the Responsible AD

RFC Editor Note

   Please allow an exception to the normal front-page limit so 
   that all eight named authors can be present.  The WG chair/
   shepherd explains it as follows:

   > Early 2010 we had 5 or 6 different drafts addressing "mpls-tp-
   > ring-protection" from one aspect or another. Most of these
   > drafts had 2 or maybe 3 different authors.
   > 
   > The WG chairs took an initiative to discuss the possibilities to
   > merge all drafts into one. The discussion was partially
   > successful, and all draft but one, were merged into a single
   > document. Texts from all drafts were merged into draft-
   > weingarten-mpls-tp-ring-protection (later to be adopted as
   > the working group draft draft-ietf-mpls-tp-ring-protection.
   > 
   > The number of authors on the first page reflect text
   > contributions made to the drafts that were merged.

---

You may rename and reposition Section 1.4 according to your style guide.

---

If (and only if) you consider it necessary,  you may consider some of the text as Tables and apply captions as follows...

In Section 3.1 on page 19 "Table x : Backup LSPs for Node Protection"
In Section 3.1.1 on page 20 "Table x : Nodes Traversed by Protection: LSPs"
In Section 3.1.1 on page 21 "Table x : Bandwidth Utilization on Links During Protection"
In Section 3.2.2 on page 25 "Table x : Context Specific Labels for Connected LSPs"
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Adrian Farrel | 20 May 2013 18:34
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Re: MPLS-RT review of draft-farbryantrel-mpls-retire-ach-tlv

Thanks Eric,

[Adding the MPLS list]

I just posted a revised I-D.

Adrian

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Eric Osborne (eosborne) [mailto:eosborne <at> cisco.com]
> Sent: 20 May 2013 17:11
> To: Loa Andersson; Lizhong Jin; Jia He; Gregory Mirsky; Martin Vigoureux
> Cc: draft-farbryantrel-mpls-retire-ach-tlv <at> tools.ietf.org; mpls-
> chairs <at> tools.ietf.org
> Subject: RE: MPLS-RT review of draft-farbryantrel-mpls-retire-ach-tlv
> 
> I have completed my review of this draft.  I have no issues with it, only a
few nits
> that I only pick in order to demonstrate that I have in fact actually read the
> document.
> 
> - The first sentence in section 1 is kind of bumpy.  I suggest something along
the
> lines of
> 
> ---
> RFC4385 says that if the first nibble of a PW packet carried over an MPLS
network
> has a value of 1 then the packet starts with a specific header format called
the
> Pseudowire Associated Channel Header, known as the PWACH or more generally
> as the ACH.
> ---
> 
> At a minimum, "defines that is the first" and "header format call the" are
typos.
> 
> 
> - Section 1 goes on to say "There are no currently live Internet-Drafts that
utilize
> ACH TLVs".  Is this a sentence that should live in perpetuity when this draft
> becomes an RFC?
> 
> - The security section suggests that removing the ACH TLV has a 'marginal
positive
> effect', but this ignores the idea that one could have an authentication TLV
or
> some sort of encrypted message; removing this capability has as much of a
> theoretical marginally negative effect as removing a vector for buffer bloat
or
> bogus TLV values.
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> eric
> 
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Loa Andersson [mailto:loa <at> pi.nu]
> > Sent: Wednesday, May 08, 2013 4:01 AM
> > To: Lizhong Jin; Jia He; Gregory Mirsky; Eric Osborne (eosborne); Martin
> > Vigoureux
> > Cc: draft-farbryantrel-mpls-retire-ach-tlv <at> tools.ietf.org; mpls-
> > chairs <at> tools.ietf.org
> > Subject: MPLS-RT review of draft-farbryantrel-mpls-retire-ach-tlv
> >
> > Jia, Lizhong, Greg and Eric,
> >
> > You have been selected as an MPLS Review team reviewers for draft-
> > farbryantrel-mpls-retire-ach-tlv-00.
> >
> > Note to authors: You have been CC'd on this email so that you can know
> > that this review is going on. However, please do not review your own
> > document.
> >
> > Reviews should comment on whether the document is coherent, is it useful
> > (ie, is it likely to be actually useful in operational networks), and is
> > the document technically sound?  We are interested in knowing whether
> > the document is ready to be considered for WG adoption (ie, it doesn't
> > have to be perfect at this point, but should be a good start).
> >
> > Reviews should be sent to the document authors, WG co-chairs and WG
> > secretary, and CC'd to the MPLS WG email list. If necessary, comments
> > may be sent privately to only the WG chairs.
> >
> > Are you able to review this draft by Mat 24, 2013?
> >
> > Thanks, Loa
> > (as MPLS WG chair)
> > --
> >
> >
> > Loa Andersson                        email: loa <at> mail01.huawei.com
> > Senior MPLS Expert                          loa <at> pi.nu
> > Huawei Technologies (consultant)     phone: +46 739 81 21 64

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Muly Ilan | 20 May 2013 14:59
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Comment on draft-ietf-mpls-tp-te-mib-06.txt

Hi,

 

Please fix a small typo.

 

Section 9.1.2.  and section 9.3.2.

mplsTunnelExtOppositeDirTnlPtr à mplsTunnelExtOppositeDirPtr

 

 

Regards,

 

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Loa Andersson | 16 May 2013 19:49
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poll to see if we have consensus to make draft-jjb-mpls-rsvp-te-hsmp-lsp an MPLS wg document

Working Group,

This is to start a two week poll on adopting
draft-jjb-mpls-rsvp-te-hsmp-lsp-04 as an MPLS working
group document.

Please send your comments (support/not support) to the mpls working
group mailing list (mpls <at> ietf.org). Please give a technical
motivation for your support/not support, especially if you think that
the document should not be adopted as a working group document.

This poll ends May 31, 2013.

There are one IPR claim against this document, see IPR claim #1840.

The authors has stated on the working group mailing list
that they are not aware of any other IPR claims against this draft.
However if you are on the the mpls working group mailing list and
aware of IPR that relates to this draft, the time to disclose
this is now.

/Loa
(mpls wg co-chair)
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Adrian Farrel | 15 May 2013 12:59
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Your draft charter

The current proposed text is at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-mpls/

Keep commenting and discussing with your chairs.

Adrian

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IETF Secretariat | 15 May 2013 12:56
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State changed: charter-ietf-mpls-05-00

State changed to Informal IESG review.

URL: http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-mpls/
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