Alper,
Please find below the view of the authors in response to your questions.
+ Concern about having not relevant material in the PS doc (e.g.
requirements, formats, layering..).
This issue has been extensively discussed even before the adoption of
this document as WG document. (Eleanor presented this during IETF# 65
if I recall exactly...) The conclusion was that having such information
in the document it helps in understanding the problem and it clearly
identifies mipshop's playground.
I went back to some emails exchange we had in September and I found the
following (Robert's email):
"....However, my recollection from the meeting (and also the minutes)
was that for a number of people, a "pure" PS draft was very difficult
to absorb without
the architectural context, which includes at least the .21 discussions.
Also in Montreal the AR-info issues came up as another (not .21)
protocol user...."
Nobody ever complained about the above statement and the authors
assumed the WG was fine with this (at least up to now).
+ Relation with 802.21
The document has undergone several review iterations from 802.21 folks.
(Yoshi triggered several times .21 experts)
We received detailed comments on section 5.2 and nothing conflicting
with .21 activities was found.
In the document we refer to Mobility Services as supporting functions
for media independent handovers and IS, ES, CS are an example.
Such interpretation of the Mobility Services was discussed/agreed back
to the Montreal meeting. (Cannot find the appropriate email thread)
+ Comment on section 4.2, 4.3 and 4.4
Again, this is part of what we call architectural context necessary to
explain the content of the document.
And yes, you are right, the scenarios come from IEEE. Is there any
problem in having them in this document?
+ About naming
ID name has been adapted to address your comment.
A final remark on the statement "Much of the functionality required for
this problem is available from existing IETF protocols or combination
thereof."
One of the DT's goals is to reuse/adapt, where possible, existing
solutions. Do you see the sentence harmful?
Please consider that the PS doc was widely discussed in Prague and
agreed by all parties.
We hope the above explanation address your concerns.
regards,
telemaco
Alper Yegin wrote:
I couldn't see what changes were made in response to my feedback (except few
items) --
http://www1.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/mipshop/current/msg03243.html.
I'd appreciate if the authors can point out if I missed any relevant
changes, or if they have some other response.
Alper
-----Original Message-----
From: Vijay Devarapalli [mailto:Vijay.Devarapalli <at> AzaireNet.com]
Sent: Thursday, May 10, 2007 12:12 AM
To: mipshop <at> ietf.org
Subject: [Mipshop] draft-ietf-mipshop-mis-ps-01.txt
Hello,
The revised draft is available. To all those who had comments during
the WG last call, please check if your comments have been addressed.
Vijay
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Subject: [Mipshop] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-mipshop-mis-ps-01.txt
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
This draft is a work item of the Mobility for IP:
Performance, Signaling and Handoff Optimization Working Group
of the IETF.
Title : Mobility Services Transport: Problem Statement
Author(s) : T. Melia, et al.
Filename : draft-ietf-mipshop-mis-ps-01.txt
Pages : 18
Date : 2007-5-9
There are on-going activities in the networking community to develop
solutions that aid in IP handover mechanisms between heterogeneous
wired and wireless access systems including, but not
limited to, IEEE
802.21. Intelligent access selection, taking into account
link layer
attributes, requires the delivery of a variety of different
information types to the terminal from different sources within the
network and vice-versa. The protocol requirements for this
signalling have both transport and security issues that must be
considered. The signalling must not be constrained to
specific link
types, so there is at least a common component to the signalling
problem which is within the scope of the IETF. This draft
presents a
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