AD Evaluation: draft-ietf-lisp-deployment
2013-05-14 17:37:03 GMT
All,
I have completed my AD Evaluation of draft-ietf-lisp-deployment.
I have some comments/questions that need to be resolved before we can
move the document along to an IETF Last Call.
1. The document leverages several terms that are not defined in this
document. It would be useful to point out where those terms are
defined. Terms that I came across that should be referenced (or defined
locally) are: map-and-encap, Loc-Status-Bits, PoPs, and path stretch.
2. Introduction
* s/(LISP) addresses the/(LISP) is designed to address the/
* s/LISP go beyond of just/LISP go beyond just/
* s/the draft we/the document we/
* I see variations of "LISP site" within the document (LISP site, LISP
Site, LISP end site). Please pick one term and make it consistent.
* The lead-in text to the definition of "LISP site" has no mention of
the definition of "Network element". It would be useful to say that the
document is defining two new terms.
* s/is connected connected to/is connected to/
3. Section 2
* s/is called Tunnel Router/is called a Tunnel Router/
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