Re: I-D Action:draft-ietf-eai-downgraded-display-03.txt
Sean Shen 沈烁 <shenshuo <at> cnnic.cn>
2009-12-03 09:06:22 GMT
Hi, EAI WG and Authors,
I read the draft and have the a few comments.
#1
Usually the "Abstract" is after "Status of this Memo" and "Copyright
Notice", right before the "Table of Contents". I went back to check previous
versions and found that 01 and 02 is in right order. Wondering why this
modification happened.
#2
section 3.2.2
Proper alignments are needed for procedure description part. Usually no
first line indent is needed for each step.
In step 1, substeps are numbered as step 1.a and 1.b, without indents. But
in step 4, substeps are numbered as 1, 2, ...7, with indents. The substeps
of step 4 has the same numbering as top level steps.
#3
section 3.2.3
I didn't understand the first sentence of this section:
"The Unknown Header Fields' Preservation Header Fields SHOULD be left
as they are unless the MUA has special knowledge of a particular
field. "
Also I noticed that "above" and "below" are used in a few places. These are
not necessary when you already clearly refer to the exact sections.
#4
section 4
The first paragraph describes a scenario that "Downgraded-From" header field
can not be reconstructed. But it's not clear then what will happen. Any
security effects?
The last paragraph refer to "security considerations" in rfc5504 and
rfc4952. But the security considerations in those documents are more about
security issues for downgrading mechenisms. I suppose the security
consideratioins in this document focuses more on downgraded-display. This
should be clarified.
Best,
Sean
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> Title : Displaying Downgraded Messages for Email Address
> Internationalization
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> Date : 2009-12-01
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> This document describes a method for displaying downgraded messages which
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