25 Oct 2001 19:24
AD review of draft-ietf-ediint-as1-13.txt
<ned.freed <at> mrochek.com>
2001-10-25 17:24:56 GMT
2001-10-25 17:24:56 GMT
I've just completed my review of -13. The major issues of -11 have all been
resolved. All that remains are a few editorial nits:
(1) This document correctly defines its requirements notation by referring
to RFC 2119. However, this belongs in a section by itself; it should
not be part of the abstract. (The RFC Editor has recently become much
pickier about the contents of abstracts.)
(2) There's still a reference to content-encoding in the last item of section
5.2.1. This needs to be removed.
(3) There's still no RFC 2298 registration form in an appendix describing
the new disposition notification options defined in this document. I
suggest something like:
A.1 IANA registration of the signed-receipt-protocol disposition notification
option
Parameter-name: signed-receipt-protocol
Syntax: See section 5.2 of this document
Specification: See section 5.2 of this document
A.2 IANA registration of the signed-receipt-micalg disposition notification
option
Parameter-name: signed-receipt-micalg
Syntax: See section 5.2 of this document
Specification: See section 5.2 of this document
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