Al Morton | 8 Jan 2012 15:12
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Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-bmwg-imix-genome-01.txt

BMWG,

This update adds Ilya Varlashkin's run-length encoding suggestion
in section 5.

have a look,
Al
(as a participant)

At 09:07 AM 1/8/2012, internet-drafts <at> ietf.org wrote:

>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
>directories. This draft is a work item of the Benchmarking 
>Methodology Working Group of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : IMIX Genome: Specification of variable 
> packet sizes for additional testing
>         Author(s)       : Al Morton
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-bmwg-imix-genome-01.txt
>         Pages           : 9
>         Date            : 2012-01-08
>
>    Benchmarking Methodologies have always relied on test conditions with
>    constant packet sizes, with the goal of understanding what network
>    device capability has been tested.  Tests with constant packet size
>    reveal device capabilities but differ significantly from the
>    conditions encountered in operational deployment, and so additional
>    tests are sometimes conducted with a mixture of packet sizes, or
>    "IMIX".  The mixture of sizes a networking device will encounter is
>    highly variable and depends on many factors.  An IMIX suited for one
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Jan Novak (janovak | 20 Jan 2012 17:10
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Re: feedback on draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-05

Hi Paul,

Thank you for your text suggestions and language
corrections - these are always particularly valuable.

I will address your comments in the next submitted
draft version.

Jan

The climate of Edinburgh is such that the weak succumb young .... 
and the strong envy them.
                                 Dr. Johnson

-----Original Message-----
From: Paul Aitken (paitken) 
Sent: 16 January 2012 21:27
To: Jan Novak (janovak)
Cc: Al Morton
Subject: feedback on draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-05

Jan,

I've finally been able to review the latest version of the draft.

I apologise that it's taken so long. Although it's late, hopefully this 
is still useful for the WGLC which ended Jan 1st.

What few comments I have are minor. I think the draft should progress 
swiftly now.
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internet-drafts | 22 Jan 2012 13:49
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I-D Action: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-06.txt


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item
of the Benchmarking Methodology Working Group of the IETF.

	Title           : IP Flow Information Accounting and Export Benchmarking Methodology
	Author(s)       : Jan Novak
	Filename        : draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-06.txt
	Pages           : 32
	Date            : 2012-01-22

   This document provides a methodology and framework for quantifying
   the performance impact of monitoring of IP flows on a network device
   and export of this information to a collector. It identifies the rate
   at which the IP flows are created, expired, and successfully exported
   as a new performance metric in combination with traditional
   throughput. The metric is only applicable to the devices compliant
   with the Architecture for IP Flow Information Export [RFC5470].

A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-06.txt

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/

This Internet-Draft can be retrieved at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-06.txt
Jan Novak (janovak | 22 Jan 2012 13:53
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Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-06.txt

Hi,
I have just posted a new version addressing
the comments from the latest review.

Jan

The climate of Edinburgh is such that the weak succumb young .... 
and the strong envy them.
                                 Dr. Johnson

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Subject: [bmwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-06.txt

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories. This draft is a work item of the Benchmarking Methodology
Working Group of the IETF.

	Title           : IP Flow Information Accounting and Export
Benchmarking Methodology
	Author(s)       : Jan Novak
	Filename        : draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-06.txt
	Pages           : 32
	Date            : 2012-01-22

   This document provides a methodology and framework for quantifying
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Al Morton | 22 Jan 2012 15:27
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Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-06.txt

At 07:53 AM 1/22/2012, Jan Novak (janovak) wrote:
>I have just posted a new version addressing
>the comments from the latest review.

Thanks, Jan.

Please have a final look everyone, I think we may be done here.

regards,
Al
bmwg chair
Paul Aitken | 22 Jan 2012 18:35
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Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-06.txt

Jan,

Thanks for the revised draft.

I have three minor editorial comments arising from the additional edits 
you made.
These could potentially be handled in the AUTH48 review. See below.

Al,

I'm happy to approve this draft. Thanks to Jan for all his hard work and 
patience.

P.

In 4.3.6, please re-add the deleted "a":

   "The MPLS forwarding performance document [RFC5695] specifies a number"
                                                                 ^

In 4.5, where you change the text to:

     "situations without packet, flow or export sampling",

Please use a serial (Oxford) comma to avoid ambiguity: "situations 
without packet, flow, or export sampling",

See http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Serial_comma#Ambiguity

Immediately above section 5.2, please re-add the deleted "the":
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Jan Novak (janovak | 22 Jan 2012 18:39
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Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-06.txt

Hi,
Ok, great - I removed those when doing
ID Nits to get the correct line lengths
without formatting pages again :-) ...

Jan

The climate of Edinburgh is such that the weak succumb young .... 
and the strong envy them.
                                 Dr. Johnson

-----Original Message-----
From: Paul Aitken (paitken) 
Sent: 22 January 2012 17:36
To: Jan Novak (janovak); Al Morton
Cc: bmwg <at> ietf.org
Subject: Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-06.txt

Jan,

Thanks for the revised draft.

I have three minor editorial comments arising from the additional edits 
you made.
These could potentially be handled in the AUTH48 review. See below.

Al,

I'm happy to approve this draft. Thanks to Jan for all his hard work and

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internet-drafts | 30 Jan 2012 19:12
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I-D Action: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-07.txt


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item
of the Benchmarking Methodology Working Group of the IETF.

	Title           : IP Flow Information Accounting and Export Benchmarking Methodology
	Author(s)       : Jan Novak
	Filename        : draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-07.txt
	Pages           : 32
	Date            : 2012-01-30

   This document provides a methodology and framework for quantifying
   the performance impact of monitoring of IP flows on a network device
   and export of this information to a collector. It identifies the rate
   at which the IP flows are created, expired, and successfully exported
   as a new performance metric in combination with traditional
   throughput. The metric is only applicable to the devices compliant
   with the Architecture for IP Flow Information Export [RFC5470].

A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-07.txt

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/

This Internet-Draft can be retrieved at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bmwg-ipflow-meth-07.txt

Gmane