Menachem Dodge | 5 Oct 18:05 2008

Re: [MIB-DOCTORS] AD review of draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl2-06.txt

Hello Dan and David,

        Thank you for your review so far, the editors are currently looking at the
issues you have raised and hope to provide a response in the next few days.

        Best Regards,
        Menachem

-----Original Message-----
From: adslmib-bounces <at> ietf.org [mailto:adslmib-bounces <at> ietf.org] On Behalf Of Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
Sent: Tuesday, September 30, 2008 11:08 AM
To: David B Harrington; adslmib <at> ietf.org
Cc: MIB Doctors (E-mail)
Subject: Re: [Adslmib] [MIB-DOCTORS] AD review of draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl2-06.txt

> -----Original Message-----
> >
> > E7. The text in the DESCRIPTION clause of the MIB module duplicates
> > text in the Overview section. No need for both, actually
> here I think
> that
> > the better place is in the overview, but the main thing in
> my view is
> > to eliminate one of them to reduce the length of the text
> >
> I hesitate to see a blanket one-or-the-other decision.
>

My comment was not aiming towards an 'one-or-the-other decision'. If it
sounded like this my mistake. I actually believe its good to have such
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