Hello All,
Many thanks to the editors for there good work in producing this draft.
I would like to call upon the working group to review this draft, which is now quite mature, and provide feedback and comments to the editors.
Best Regards,
Menachem
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From: Moti Morgenstern
Sent: Tuesday, January 29, 2008 10:37 AM
To: 'adslmib <at> ietf.org'
Cc: 'Romascanu, Dan \(Dan\)'; Menachem Dodge
Subject: draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl2-04.txt
Hello all,
I've submitted the -04 version to the internet-drafts.
Here are the changes included in this revision compared to -03 revision. Many changes are due to the fact that ITU-T G.997.1 was updated while we were working on this draft document.
- Added the G.997.1 Amendment 1 to the references. Also mentions it where needed (e.g., where G.997.1 is mentioned in the description and near affected parameters).
- Updated the definition of Xdsl2LineClassMask and Xdsl2LineUs0Mask per G.997.1 Amendment 1.
- Updated the definition of xdsl2ChStatusLPath per G.997.1 Amendment 1.
- Updated the description of xdsl2LConfProfClassMask and changed its default value per G.997.1 Amendment 1.
- Updated the description of xdsl2ChStatusInpReport per G.997.1 Amendment 1.
- Added Maximum delay variation (xdsl2ChConfProfMaxDelayVar) and Channel Initialization Policy Selection (xdsl2ChConfProfInitPolicy) to channel configuration profile, per amendment 1.
- Added a group for optional channel level configuration parameters. Currently holds the xdsl2ChConfProfMaxDelayVar and xdsl2ChConfProfInitPolicy.
- Also added Xdsl2ChInitPolicy TC to serve the xdsl2ChConfProfInitPolicy attribute.
- Minor correction in the reference clause of ratio parameters included in the xdsl2LineConfTemplateEntry. Also updated their description clause.
- Minor correction in the reference clause of parameters included in the Xdsl2LineInventoryEntry
- Corrected the definition of xdsl2LConfProfMsgMinUs/Ds
- Corrected the description of Xdsl2LineCeFlag TC.
- Revised the description of Xdsl2LineForceInp TC.
- Revised the description of Xdsl2Band TC and the description of xdsl2LineBand index (i.e., main point is that 'upstream' and 'downstream' are used also for VDSL2)
- Minor correction in the description of Xdsl2Tssi TC and the description of xdsl2SCStatusSegmentTssi attribute. Moved the attribute to the xdsl2LineTable (now it is called: xdsl2LineStatusTssiDs and xdsl2LineStatusTssiUs) because it's actually per line+direction (and not related to the DELT), similar to the Trellis related status parameters, rather than per sub-carrier.
- Added Xdsl2MRefPsdDs and Xdsl2MRefPsdUs TCs
- Added xdsl2LineStatusMrefPsdDs and xdsl2LineStatusMrefPsdUs to xdsl2LineTable
- Xdsl2ChInitPolicy added to the IMPORT list
- Changed the names prefix of all groups from vdsl2xxxx to xdsl2xxxx
Updated DESCRIPTION of xdsl2LineCnfgFallbackTemplate
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- Updated description to make it clear that this attribute
is optional.
- Specified how the fallback mechanism should behave
if the xTU-C fails to train up using the fallback template.
Updated "Managing Profiles And Templates" Section
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- Updated this section to make it clear that the
xdsl2LineCnfgFallbackTemplate attribute
is optional.
- Specified how the fallback mechanism should behave
if the xTU-C fails to train up using the fallback template.
Updated "Security Considerations" Section
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- Mentioned the security implications of unwanted
changes to the xdsl2LineCnfgFallbackTemplate attribute.
Updated TC 'Xdsl2OperationModes'
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- Update enumerated values to include ADSL modes.
- Updated the DESCRIPTION clause to be consistent
with the new enumerated values.
Updated TC 'Xdsl2MrefPsdDs'
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- Changed DESCRIPTION clause.
Specified the use of a variable length OCTET STRING instead
of specifying the number of breakpoints as the first byte of
the OCTET STRING.
Updated TC 'Xdsl2MrefPsdUs'
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- Changed DESCRIPTION clause.
Specified the use of a variable length OCTET STRING instead
of specifying the number of breakpoints as the first byte of
the OCTET STRING.
Updated DESCRIPTION of xdsl2LineStatusMrefPsdDs
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- Specified the use of a variable length OCTET STRING instead
of specifying the number of breakpoints as the first byte of
the OCTET STRING.
Updated DESCRIPTION of xdsl2LineStatusMrefPsdUs
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- Specified the use of a variable length OCTET STRING instead
of specifying the number of breakpoints as the first byte of
the OCTET STRING.
Updated "Textual Conventions" Section
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- Changed description of Xdsl2OperationModes TC.
Replaced "ADSL mode" with "xDSL mode" in 2 places.
- Changed description of Xdsl2MrefPsdDs TC.
Specified the use of a variable length OCTET STRING instead
of specifying the number of breakpoints as the first byte of
the OCTET STRING.
- Changed description of Xdsl2MrefPsdUs TC.
Specified the use of a variable length OCTET STRING instead
of specifying the number of breakpoints as the first byte of
the OCTET STRING.
- Copyright statements updated.
- Corrected 3 typos where “Overlapeed” used instead of “Overlapped”
- Deleted editor notes not required any more
- Other minor editorial corrections (e.g., idnits comments for Xdsl2BpscResult, xdsl2LineCmndConfBpscFailReason, Xdsl2LineForceInp, xdsl2LineCmndConfLdsf, xdsl2LineSegmentEntry, xdsl2LineSegmentBitsAlloc, xdsl2LineBandTable, xdsl2LineBandStatusLnAtten, xdsl2LineBandStatusSigAtten, xdsl2LineBandStatusSnrMargin, xdsl2SCStatusRowStatus, xdsl2SCStatusSegmentEntry, xdsl2SCStatusSegmentLinImg, xdsl2SCStatusSegmentSnr, xdsl2SCStatusSegmentBitsAlloc, xdsl2LineConfTemplateTable, xdsl2LConfTempChan1RaRatioDs/Us, xdsl2LConfTempChan2RaRatioUs, xdsl2LConfTempChan3RaRatioDs/Us, xdsl2LConfProfRfiBands, xdsl2LConfProfTxRefVnDs/Us, xdsl2LConfProfDpboEPsd, xdsl2LConfProfDpboEsCableModelA/B/C, xdsl2LConfProfDpboMus, xdsl2LConfProfUpboKL, xdsl2LineConfProfModeSpecBandUsTable, xdsl2LConfProfUpboPsdA/B, vdsl2LineBpscGroup, vdsl2LineBpscGroup, vdsl2LineSegmentGroup)
- Added acknowledgments
Best Regards,
Moti Morgenstern
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