Don't rubberstamp Borat blurbs.
Hi all
I've raised this before, but I still see it happening.
I think we do ourselves a disservice if we publish borderline
incomprehensible listings on plone.org
By this I mean no offense to writers submitting in a second or third
language, but no one wants to invite comparison to @devops_borat
unintentionally.
I've rewritten this one:
http://plone.org/support/sites/polimex-mostostal-corporate-portal
and I include the before and after texts below for you to judge
whether I'm being too harsh.
I don't think we should generally offer a free copy-editing service,
but I do think we should bounce listings back until we get something
that reflects positively on both Plone and the submitting company.
Alternatively we should allow mother-tongue listings and
opportunistically translate listings where possible.
=== Version 1 ===
"""
Corporate Portal for Polimex-Mostostal. This is a next successful
implementation of portal by Webservice for companies listed in WIG20 on Stock
Exchange.
The main goal of a new project was to facilitate an access to information about
Polimex-Mostostal to all portal users through user-friendly and simple
architecture. New portal improves and strengthens companies image in Internet
and is main tool of communication with a customer.
Portal structure is divided into two parts. First one includes information
about the company profile, second – presentation of offer split into main
companies activities and projects. This partition facilitates navigation in
portal structure and enables intuitive search for information. For those
interested in jobs in Polimex-Mostostal S.A., separate Career Dept. has been
prepared. It includes recruitment module “CV online” integrated with HR SAP
module. Special attention should be paid also to new Investor Relation dept.
which clear form and useful mechanism, i.e. advanced charts, distinguish
company among competitors.
"""
=== Version 2 ===
"""
Corporate portal for Polimex-Mostostal, a Polish engineering and construction
company which is listed in the WIG20 on the Warsaw Stock Exchange.
The main goal for the portal was to facilitate access to information about
Polimex-Mostostal through user-friendly and simple layout. The new portal
improves and strengthens the image of the company on the Internet, and is the
main tool for customer communication.
The portal is structured as two parts: firstly, company profile information;
and secondly, presentation of the company's main activities and projects.
This structure facilitates intuitive navigation and discovery of information.
For those interested in careers at Polimex-Mostostal S.A., a separate Career
Department has been prepared. It includes a recruitment module “CV online”
integrated with the HR SAP module of the company.
The new Investor Relation department is also noteworthy. It offers clear forms
and useful functionality; i.e. advanced charts which distinguish the company
from competitors.
"""
My translation may include misunderstandings where I guessed at the
meaning of the original.
Regards,
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